I liked it alot keep it up 5/5 ~melissa~ maybe you can give your opionions on my poems

I enjoyed this one, I like how it ends with a question especially. Good work =]

I agree with them, and good job! keep it up!

Wow!!.beautiful poem n a great end..
word choce was simple n effective too...all in all...neat write!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I need to fix this, but I cannot on my own
Will you be there?
Can you repair my shattered soul?

such a sad poem it made me sad . that was your excellent work take care 5/5

Great poem. I don't know why it's rating is not a 5.0 I see nothing wrong with it. The word choice was great and the flow was very nice. I gave it a 5/5.

The words and emotions in this are great. The only thing I don't like is the somewhat all over the place structure. The lines in stanzas are inconsistent, which I don't like. Overall though, it was an enjoyable read.

"I feel rage burn, consuming my soul " < take out burn and the comma. :/

Other than that this was an amazing poem. The flow was a bit off, and I think it would have been better as one poem; just my preference. But, the emotion was amazing. Along with the word choices.
Keep it up. :]

Wow I loved how the title wasn't exactly what the poem was about at first thought. I thought your vocabulary was amazingly awesome (if thats a word). I really enjoyed this piece.
5/5
kaila

Excellent!

well this one is much different from the other one that i did, the style is simple, the concept and every lines exerts powerful ideas..

keep it up!