"to be able to have
freedom of speech
and not be judge for
what they do or who they are..."

This was invariably the desire of each human living on this contemptuous, earthly world. To judge others, I suppose, by their positive and negative features is characteristic of an individual. It is humans' perfectly imperfect nature after all...

For your first piece of poetical work, I think you've done quite well upon writing such a topic in regards to the society. Just tighten up the lines and add more rhythm to it for an enhancement. X) Keep it up and your star will glitter eventually! Take care.

I am not the best poem writer in the world myself but i think you have done well , how about more poems?they will get better with practise 5/5 Steve