The fight you cannot escape

by Some guy done with college   May 26, 2007


Is it uncommon
to see your best friend die?
look now into their eyes
...know them
...laugh with them
...enjoy knowing them
because when you look again
their eyes...

...lifeless
...motionless
...amazed

look at them lay
dead as a tree

war did this
after years of living
only to lose
all your friends

(War... it's too cruel)

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  • 16 years ago

    by ava michelle

    I like your poem its cute
    lol

  • 17 years ago

    by xD Jennifer Dx

    That happened to me. I saw her die...and i wish i could of read this poem then and not now.

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow i couldnt imagine my best friend dying, wow, i feel depressed, nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    This is a really good poem and has a powerful message!!! It is soo sad! i really like the form of the beginning and middle of your poem!!
    peace

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