Girls Like Me.

by Teria   May 26, 2007


Suddenly I'm torn down by diseases.
Life's slowly catching up as the fun ceases.
I turn away from light, turn away from darkness.
I search and search, there's something I miss.
No clues, no fears, not a thing at all.
But, bodies chilled and droplets fall.
Piercing sounds and gory scenes.
Forgetting the past by all means.
Girls like me are rarely found,
but, me oh my's are all around.
Hidden under beauty and masks,
with a million questions still unasked.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was really cute.. Hmm.. let me see.. Maybe if you broke it up into 2 or 3 stanza's that would help to be able to read it better..

    I thought the flow was really good and i like how you rhymed some of the sentences.. it was original and very good. it was kinda short but i think you pulled it off you got what you wanted to get out.

    I give this a 5/5 because i thought it was really cute and Original..

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was really good and original 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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