Wow that was really good and original 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This was really cute.. Hmm.. let me see.. Maybe if you broke it up into 2 or 3 stanza's that would help to be able to read it better..

I thought the flow was really good and i like how you rhymed some of the sentences.. it was original and very good. it was kinda short but i think you pulled it off you got what you wanted to get out.

I give this a 5/5 because i thought it was really cute and Original..