Honestly?
I can sort of hear this in a poetry club.
I can hear the rhythm.
And this guy talking slowly...
Beauty.
I love your format.
It's easy to read out loud.
That kind of why I thought about the
Drums :P
All in all,
It's okay.
Not the best but not the worst eitehr.
But just because of your format.
5/5 :]

This poem is absolutely beautiful, and the fact that you wrote it about me makes it even better :D. i read it like 5 times yesterday tehe. you're amazing, do you know that? you really know the way to my heart. i love you.

Awww. Great poem, makes me wish I had someone. Good job.