You've painted a place in my heart

I found that line to be the strongest in the poem for it held great emotion and you portrayed it well. This poem was enjoyable to read as its a nice dedication. Well done~mel

You've painted a place in my heart
And I will never let it go apart

Wow!!^^....perfectly chosen words..beautiful lines..intense..u've portrayed the emotion so well.....great write
Kp it up..very sweet=)
xxPoojaxx

Great write man, love the it ,wording was perfect
lot of feeling ,very heartfelt poem, thanks for sharing,~5/5~ your friend Tracy

I thought it was very nice, at one part the rhyme seemed a little forced, but the structure was great, keep up the good work, 5/5

Fsams
What a beautiful poem. Anyone would be lucky to call you friend.
Take Care Cindy

I looove this poem

Nice poem about friendship. Enjoyable to read!

Wooooow! ok i find this poem totally awesome because i can relate so much its like its a chapter out of my mind! =] but ofcourse you wrote it, which makes it evn more wow! lol i know the feelings, ive been there done that..lol the saying.. =] great work!!! definately 5/5
nuf luv xx

Very nice!!

God bless u

I love your poem you are a very talented writer 5/5

Wow
again your so amazing
i loved this poem
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i cant even critisize it

Aaah.. it realy touched my heart. that was amazingly written.. nicely panned aswell kepp it up nice work takecare 5/5

I like your poem, keep up the good work.

alex!!!

Amazing ^__^ keep it up

Wow ^^

Aww this is such a sweet poem.. i love the last 2 lines.. they are amazing and the whole poem tells so much with so much emotion.. nice job. 5/5

This poem reminds me of me,.,
i think it rocks..
good one.,.:P

Kia

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I love the line "you've painted a place in my heart"! this is such a great poem! thanks for commenting on my poetry!
~claire

Okay first off I will be honest. one part is different but heres how you could fix it remember its just a suggestion,
You've painted a place in my heart
And I will never let it *grow apart.
Maybe it works maybe it doesn't just go over it. Othere than that GREAT~100%homemade.lol

Aw. that was very cute. good job.