Excellent piece of true friendship. Love the last 2 lines. wow |
That was beautiful and very heartfelt =) The flow was great and your choice of words makes it one of a kind =) Truly great ^_^ A well deserved 5 =D |
I like the wording, and the text in which it was put was lovely. 5/5 |
by Jackie Marie
You are an amazing writer. |
by Robert
Reading it was abit too choppy for me, The flow was off then it could be me, the message was good and the greatfulness was profound, but the words seemed more scripted then to fklow. Plot121 |
by Birgit
"With only smiles not worries" |
by Becca
It reminded me of when I moved to another state from my two best friends. One of which I grew up with since birth and been through everything together. I miss him. |
by Kristina
Aww this is good. i really like the way you wrote it. and it was a great topic you picked. what a great job. 5/5 |
I gave this a very well deserved 5/5! It's definatly a favorite poem of mine, and the reason I'm adding you to my favs.. I just love your poems... and I absolutley adore this one... amazingly written... just beautiful... a great poem about friendship... keep up the amazing writing! |
by ShootingStar
Ohh..nice one |
by ShootingStar
You're rite.you'll give everything for your beloved best friend: ) |
Just a beautiful poem you had written.... |
by Hebe
Great poem. |
Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5 |
Short and sweet i really liked it!!! always Manda |
by Robert
This was a nice poem the flow was good and the message was well executed but, in some ways to have missed something well good poem none the less. Plot121 |
Wow very nice flow |