Nice poem with good selection of words. Rhyming n with a good flow.
5/5 n my votes r with u
with love
Fsams

Great job. 5/5

Tracy
This is very heartfelt. The sadness can be felt from everyword.

Just living for the moment, in that time frame, because It felt right
I lay here and think about that and how it got me alone at night.

These lines really bring tears.
Take care Cindy

Very, very, very, very GOOD! :-)