by Dee May 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
I cup my face in my hands ans tears roll down my cheeks, |
by Robert
The poem had alot of thoughts you left in the air but nothing really to tie them all together I guess I was just lost but I didn't see you close any of your words or thought tight enogh for the reader to care what th secret was. Plot121 |
by Brittany C
You are a great poetess. I loved al of your poems I read. This one had a great flow, wonderful word choice and a nice format. The emotions were deep and help make the poem interesting and easy to read and understand. I gave it a 5/5 |
Hey, |