by Dee May 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Homeless 1 |
by Fsams
Wow dainee this is superb. No problem in word choice and he rhymes are very cute. I love the poem all the way. Its great 5/5 for sure. tc |
Very excellent write me love so much i love the way words can speak great job |
Excellent poem,deep sad and all to real to life , wording was wonderful, nice flow and sent out a good message to everyone, great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow... what do i say? firstly i think this should be made into like a poster or something for scholls etc as your essage is very very clear. i like it because when you first start readin it its the first thoughts you have of running away and being free, you dont consider everything you say in part two, i like this. i think your talent is very good and do honestly think this poem deserves a lot more than what it has because thats a strong and powerful message xxxx |
This is by far my favorite poem of yours. Its amazing. I love the change in ideas and the realization of reality. Keep it up |