I like your poems ,keep up the good work practise makes perfect 5/5 Steve

Very intresting writinng good work take care 5/5

I agree, being a homeless teen isn't really that fun, and just running away from it is a cowardly act. Everything's a game in this world as I see it but hey, don't listen to me, I'm blabbing noticle phrases again. 5/5

This is by far my favorite poem of yours. Its amazing. I love the change in ideas and the realization of reality. Keep it up

Wow... what do i say? firstly i think this should be made into like a poster or something for scholls etc as your essage is very very clear. i like it because when you first start readin it its the first thoughts you have of running away and being free, you dont consider everything you say in part two, i like this. i think your talent is very good and do honestly think this poem deserves a lot more than what it has because thats a strong and powerful message xxxx

Excellent poem,deep sad and all to real to life , wording was wonderful, nice flow and sent out a good message to everyone, great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Very excellent write me love so much i love the way words can speak great job

Wow dainee this is superb. No problem in word choice and he rhymes are very cute. I love the poem all the way. Its great 5/5 for sure. tc