An Encounter with a Deer

by kitkat girl   May 26, 2007


One things for sure as I
Stare
Into Those
Cold,
Dark
..Snap!
Black
Eyes
We
..Crunch!
Try to
Resist
The energy
...Snap!
Pulling us
Closer
And
..Crunch!
Nearer, but

Curiosity
Snap!
Gives
Crunch! way. Snap!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    To be honest I really don't like short poems.. But I think this was an okay poem, I really like the way you used short lines, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    I like the way this poem is laid out it really got me thinking.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the structure you used in this one! It was great, really matched the tone of the poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Crunch and Snap adds a lot to this. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by rita

    Cool poem loved the flow