by kitkat girl May 26, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
One things for sure as I |
by Marc Ortiz
To be honest I really don't like short poems.. But I think this was an okay poem, I really like the way you used short lines, keep it up. |
by Adelle
I like the way this poem is laid out it really got me thinking. |
by Gem
I loved the structure you used in this one! It was great, really matched the tone of the poem |
by Fan Angeleo
Crunch and Snap adds a lot to this. Great job. |
by rita
Cool poem loved the flow |