Cool poem loved the flow

Crunch and Snap adds a lot to this. Great job.

I loved the structure you used in this one! It was great, really matched the tone of the poem
5/5
*Gem*

I like the way this poem is laid out it really got me thinking.

To be honest I really don't like short poems.. But I think this was an okay poem, I really like the way you used short lines, keep it up.