You said you don't
have time for me,
so why?
Why did you make
her have me?
Is this the way
You treated her?
Just like a child's
rag doll,
in your little game.....
Is that all I am
to you?
You said you care for me;
I don't want to hear it.
I want to know you love me,
That I'm more important in
your heart,
than those people you call,
"Important"
I want to spend time with you,
I want to be with you,
but it seems,
You just toss me aside
like your little
Rag Doll....
Hmm.
Good word choice for sure; loved the comparison of you&ragdoll.
Umm. Maybe stanzas? Would help the flow...
Other than that amazing job.
Keep it up. :]