Absolutely beautiful... Excellent piece.

5/5

[tragic]

Beautiful...
i mean i did'nt find any thing wrong withit as such...yeah it did have it's own charm...n was filled with emetions..very nicely penned too...
Great work!
5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

I really liked the poem I thought it was written very nicely, the words were spoken so true and sweet. The downside of love is we miss the person like crazy even if they leave for 5 minutes. Excellent job 5/5 P.S. I have an idea for a title here just PM me if your interested. Take care