O...M....G... that is one of the best poems I have ever read. That is.. amazing. The message behind that, that death and destruction and "justice" is all a vicious cycle that never stops. Just.. Wow.. I am amazed. I honestly can't stop reading it. It is a refreshingly deep poem. 5/5 seems inadequate.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Wow, this was very well done. The flow was good, the descriptions were amazing, and the words you used wonderful. The metaphors and deep meanign throughout gave it that extra specialness. Nice job. 5/5

Wow!!
Really really beautiful...perfect title...n excellent flow...n the descriptions r just so amazing...n the words u used were so so perfect....everything was wonderful....Beyond words...incredible write!!
=)
5/5!...i wish i could give more...
kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Take a bow, for you the star have just stolen the show. That was one of two best poem I have read tonight. the word choice and vocab were well thought out, and brillantly placed. the emtion was deep and powerful, and the story was full of vivid imagery. well done 5/5 although I wish i could give you more.