Comments : So i wanted to wright a silly poem. Bubblegum

  • 17 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    Damn gurl I would flip out! LOL!
    Nice!

  • 17 years ago

    by brie kelly wise

    Cute...
    although i am addicted to gum
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Lol very funny!!!! i got a kick out of reading this

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Lol cute and good! it flowed well and it gave me a laugh

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol.....cute
    very cute work...it flowed well
    n the idea was really good..n lol..it was funny too

    Kp writing!
    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Regardless about the poem's unnatural flow and seemingly forced lines, I'd still give you my props for successfully making me smile. :) I wear a set of braces, by the way; and I haven't chewed gum since then... X)

    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by bRiTtAnY

    Nice poem