Him

by Emma   May 26, 2007


When i was a young girl
I wondered about him up there
I couldn't quite believe
There could be someone so strong

Creator of all things
Good and Evil
He watches us all
And forgives us our sins

I've grown up to realise
How powerful he is
He carries my burdens
He's shown me the way

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