Ben
This poem brought tears to my eyes. Your writing always manages to move me in some way.
Excellent job!
Take care love Cindy

Wow...this poem is one of the best that I've read. So touching and sad. Good work. Keep it up.

--Iz

Hey Ben, i know what this is about and i so very much agree with you. some people just live in their own world and treat themselves as Master Of Life. I just wish that they do go through some real pain to know the value of word in real life.

Great poem friend...keep writing

all the best and take care

Very well written...couldn't have said it better myself! As always..excellent stuff from you dear "Ben"....lol....5/5 Debbie

Good job putting this to rhyme. Interested to see how this will be interpreted.