Ouch!!!

by handsome   May 26, 2007


This hurts...oh my God, it hurts so badly
did you see what she just did to me??
oh stupid me, how can you have seen
she just broke my heart and ouch, that hurts
oh my God, it hurts so badly

now am done.
now she has done her worst
she aimed for the real thing
she got me pretty badly
its my heart...ouch
oh my God it hurts so badly

what do i do now???
am still so very young
what do i give to the next
just in case there is a next
but i guess am done for good
cos this time she aimed real good
she aimed for the real thing
oh my God it hurts so badly

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rowena Linley

    Wow this is a great poem, I love it. I can relate to this poem (But not with a girl) with me and eight (Yes thats his name) He broke my heart and now I am wondering if there will ever be someone else and whether I'll have something to give to him if there is!

  • 17 years ago

    by secrets and lies Xo

    This is the way i felt when i walked in on my ex and my "friend" having a love fest! This is the type of poem that has so much emotion and it relates to reality!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, it was great you put your heart break in a funny way. the words you used were great. someone will be there and you will find them and know exactly what to give. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    You spoke so truly, I love it. But there will be another to mend you dear broken heart. I know how much that hurts....

  • 17 years ago

    by SHoRTy

    Good poem i like it!!
    stop by and give me sum comments!!! i would appricitate it

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