Egami Rorrim

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   May 26, 2007


Noitcelfer ym,
Noitcefrep gnikcal,
Ylhsrah em skcom,
Ylkciuq em gnilppirc.

Tiz yreve,
Ti gnitcelfer rorrim eht,
Der dna gib,
Deb ot back gniog m'I.

Ees ot sdeen eno on,
Em fo ecaf gnitsugsid siht,
Srevoc rednu edih tsuj ll'I,
Reffus fo srehto eht evas.

Egami rorrim diputs,
Hsimelb yreve gniniltuo,
Ecaf ym revo gnikat,
Efas erehwon em gnivael.

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If you can't get this, then your not reading.
And beneath all this there is surprisingly depth. Just connect the metaphor(s).

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Tiz yreve,
    Ti gnitcelfer rorrim eht,
    Der dna gib,
    Deb ot back gniog m'I.
    [[I really dislike this stanza at all.]]

    Ees ot sdeen eno on,
    Em fo ecaf gnitsugsid siht,
    [[I'm not sure why, but I really like that line.]]

    This is an interesting idea, and it must have taken a lot of time to do it and figure it out. Nicely done there, however, I thought the overall poem wasn't that well. The idea of how to write it was great, but the actual poem once you read it, wasn't.
    Sorry.

    xTheEcstaysofSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Umm...
    This is weird.
    I get it, though.
    Backwards.
    I don't know, I just find this weird.
    Hard to grade and hard to understand.
    All in all,
    Like I said, dear...
    Strange 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Oh wow..this poem is awesome! the idea of the mirror reflectiion writing is so blimming clever! and the use of the metaphors was really good, coz it was quite mysterious how the whole poem had a whole other meaning. and even all the metaphors themselves together had a meaning too..if u get wat i mean..lol neways..overall..this isa very good poem, im expecting it to be in the weekly contest =] nuf luv xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Stupid mirror imgage! WoW it took a lil time for me to read whole poem. Its really good 5/5. I think 'back' should b 'kcab' as per the stipulated rules. he he its great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Hah this is really cool
    definitly original
    very nice

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