I think the poem is awesome because at first glance you don't even realize what it is, it doesn't even look english. Most people would just stop reading right there without a second thought. I think that's just like your poem and the fact that sometimes the reflection in the mirror doesn't show the true colours of who we are. People choose to see what they want to see, sometimes they miss out on amazing chances because they were to stupid to take a second look. I thought the poem was excellent and the way you wrote it backwards was special and unique, thats the way it would look in a mirror image. Excellent job 5/5 |
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Wow.. that was awsome.. Just makes you think how many people actucally read poems. |
Just Wow. That is all I can mutter right now. I absouletly absouletly loved it. I am beyond speechless right now because not only is it completely awesome that you wrote it backwards, the message in the actual poem is so strong and clear. I love how anyone can relate to this poem because no matter what you do, everytime you look in the mirror, all you can focus on is the bad aspects of your reflection and all the things wrong with it. I also love how because you wrote it backwards, it puzzles people who actually like to read and go into the depth of poems. You amaze me with your skill. It deserves much more than a 5/5, but that's what I'll have to settle for. |
by Vanessa
Alright that was really really diffrent at first I was like what the f but I figured I liked that style you used to get attention, It made me think, really, went along witht the poem too, mirror images. really diffrent and really really amazing. I loved this and i am putting it in my favorites, That was worth the effort. |
by Melpomene
I found this poem to be quite amazing atleast it makes people ACTUALLY read the poem not just skim through it. I found the first stanza to be amazing your words were stunning truely beautiful. This was definitly an amazing read. Well done~mel |
by Jessica
Deb ot back gniog m'I. |
by Fluffy
I'm surprised at how quickly I picked that up. I didn't think I would at first glance. Meh. Nevertheless, an emotive piece in its unusual and unique way. Well done and I applaud you as the first person to actually put this style in action :). |
by Melly
That was very interesting. great way to make |
by Kaila
Hah this is really cool |
by Fsams
Stupid mirror imgage! WoW it took a lil time for me to read whole poem. Its really good 5/5. I think 'back' should b 'kcab' as per the stipulated rules. he he its great. |
by Mezmeryz
Oh wow..this poem is awesome! the idea of the mirror reflectiion writing is so blimming clever! and the use of the metaphors was really good, coz it was quite mysterious how the whole poem had a whole other meaning. and even all the metaphors themselves together had a meaning too..if u get wat i mean..lol neways..overall..this isa very good poem, im expecting it to be in the weekly contest =] nuf luv xx |
by Startle Me
Umm... |
Tiz yreve, |