Mow you see, I like this poem, Probably cos I was with you this day and can relate" aND YES, i AM SORRY FOR MAKING YOU PLAY SCRABBLE! However you did win and so did accomplish something this day although you told Alison you didn't! Mind you I don't blame you she was pissed when she asked you the question! There's only one fault I can find which is 'Why is itin the funny section?' I wouldn't have out it there. It is a hard poem to place but after careful consideraion I thought it should be in the nature section. However I do understand that no one reads the nature section!
All my love
Bethan XxXxXxXxX

Lol this is a good poem for a little kid. You would be good at nursery rhymes lol.
-vino