I Will Always Love You.

I really like this poem i relate to almost every line you can tell its so true good job jackie keep up th good work
i would really apreciate if you returned the faovr k
*cupcake*

This is a really good poem~
5/5

I want you to know I will do what it takes,
^ I think it would sound better as "whatever" instead of "what".

Awh, this was sweet. The flow was pretty good but the rhymes made it a bit awkward. Try and work on that. Also, the words you used were quite simple, expand your vocabulary a little bit and it will make your descriptions better. Nice job though. 4/5

This was quite delightful to read. It's seeming earnest sentiments endears me completely, whereas the lines need tightening up.

A cute piece, nonetheless.

-Marian =]

I liked this poem, It was simple yet effective. I found it to hold such strong emotions in such simple words. This poem was full of love and I found this to be a great read. Well done with this. ~mel