Beautiful peice...very beautiful...filled with emotions...very powerful work...deep n heartfelt..n the repetition gave a good effect to the emotions portrayed..
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5/5!
Good work..kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Very heart filled, its a magnificent peice of poetry. You should publish. Its really really great!

5/5 ^_^

My friend. the true feelings of love shine from your poem. that realy touched my heart. it is so good that you wrote such a lovely poem. i loved your work and i impressed i will must give you 5/5

Amazing it all coming straight from the heart. It's like the reader is living also through it all while just reading it.. Beautiful write. It's sad how it ended.
Keep up the amazing work!:)
5/5