by argueing with the rain May 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Another wasted night. church bells ring in the distance and I cringe. So hard to face myself right now. So hard to accept my imperfections. All I ask God, please give me tomorrow. Bring the sun down on this evil existence. Cigarette smoke hides my tired face. Protecting the world from the hurt in my eyes. Give me tomorrow God, give me another chance. Wake me from this nightmare. Everything I hate has become part of my personal story. Nailed to my crucifix. Attached to something I cant change. Dragging along the weights of failure. God give me tomorrow, protect me from myself. Time to look in the mirror, screams reflecting back at me. Dawn breaks on my life. Reality begins to return to me. Sobriety enters the mind. Loathing every act I create, setting fire to my own being. Someone give me tomorrow, fulfill the promise of something better. Stop the painful voices, and show me the white flowers that grow in tomorrows sun. |
by Sora
Wow this was beautiful. very deep and also quite powerful. pure and heartfelt write. i loved it! job well done. 5/5. |
by StandStill
Great poem. can clearly pick out the emotions. and god will always give you tomorrow, in one way or another....<3 |
by Donna
This is really good, so much emotion shown, i loved it. if u get a chance can u rate and comment some of mine please. they r old ones but still ,,,, thanks |
by Fay
This poem is soo intense and full of deep emotions, i loved it, its ok hold on, ull get there and see the white flowers, be patient. Plz read mine, im sure u could relate. |