This poem actually made me go 'Aww' at the end. It is sad but at the sametime, made me feel a little hopeful. I loved the fact that this didn't rhyme because it made it seem so much more realistic. It was very well done and the repetition again was great! :]

Hmm. I like it, a lot.
But, 'we're all just a little bit lonely' didn't quite fit in at the end of EVERY stanza.
Other than that it was amazing.
I loved the meaning, and the way you put it all into words.

Keep it up, hun.

1st stanza "He turned her to ask." maybe try "He turned to her to ask." It just sounds better and reads better.

I liked how it was a conversation and how you used description. I loved the word choice and format of the poem. The flow was also good. I gave it a 5/5.