I love the title it drew me in right away. The poem was really good loved it well done hunni xxx alex xxx

It's very pretty, and dream like. I enjoyed it, it was really easy to read too, very smooth.

5/5

~*Alex*~

P.S Two Alex's have commented on this poem hehehehe.

This was a very very good poem. I loved the way it was written. I liked the darkness of it. Good job. Definitely one of my favorites. 5/5

This poem was really fantastic, I loved the flow and your choice of words they were great. "Peace comes to those who listen
Hearing the sacred voice" I thought those lines were amazing. Excellent job 5/5

Hmmm..i dont know why but i get the feeling this poem has two meanings..but the most clearest to me, was death taking life away...once again good imagery. i like the short and simpleness of your poems, it makes them more inviting to read..=] nuf luv xx