by tyanna May 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Another child goes hungry, |
Not many people tackle issues such as this, the whole poverty in other countries thing but it's nice to see that change, good format and good write |
by Mezmeryz
Hey..this poem i one of those which tends to bring a tear to the eye. a very contraversial subject, and a very emotional write. good rhythm and flow and nice straight forward message at the end too. relates greatly to some of my poems...your poem touched my heart =] nuf luv xx |
Thats so sad.. That really is an eye opener.. you can really see the emotion you put into this poem. I enjoyed reading this a lot.. i thought the flow and rhyme were really good.. and great word choice.. 5/5 |
by Brittany C
I liked this poem. It sends out a strong message about proverty and how it can affect a kid. I gave this poem a 5/5. |
This poem was amazing. alot of emotion put into it. its really sad that stuff is true. well done. 5/5 |