I loved the meaning it had behind this poem, it was great I can relate to it heaps, good job. Plz read mine im sure u could relate as well :).

Luv Fay

There are a few mistakes, spelling or grammor in this. 4th line, 8th line, and 12th line.

but your message was great. i love your poetry, its def! getting better. you do have enormas talent!

5/5 David

WOW! Thats exactly, to a T how I feel.....man oh man you write wonderfully. Its filled with true emotion and true pain. It flowed nicely for the most part too. Like David said, there were some mistakes, but nothing too serious. Great job!