by Allison May 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Tick Tock Tick Tock |
by Mezmeryz
Wow..i got to say i have not reada poem like this one on the whole site..lol because every single one ive read is either about depression or love etc..but this is a more varied subject..that long wait for the school day to end, just before a holiday! yay! lol great right mate, plenty of figurative language and imagery..dont stop writing! xx |
I don't think that their is a greater feeling when your in school then hearing that final bell ring releasing you for the summer. To bad it never seems to last that long, always goes by way to fast. Excellent job 5/5 |
by Zeus
Wow. this is a cool poem. I can totally relate because now school seem to be longer since its coming to an end. Good Job |
This was awsome.. I really liked this.. it rhymed and flowed really well... |
by Alex
I'm homeschooled so I don't relate to this one, but I thought it was great! |