Cool, everybody hates the last day because they just want to have fun for a few weeks. You showed this well xxx alex xxx |
by Alex
I'm homeschooled so I don't relate to this one, but I thought it was great! |
This was awsome.. I really liked this.. it rhymed and flowed really well... |
by Zeus
Wow. this is a cool poem. I can totally relate because now school seem to be longer since its coming to an end. Good Job |
I don't think that their is a greater feeling when your in school then hearing that final bell ring releasing you for the summer. To bad it never seems to last that long, always goes by way to fast. Excellent job 5/5 |
by Mezmeryz
Wow..i got to say i have not reada poem like this one on the whole site..lol because every single one ive read is either about depression or love etc..but this is a more varied subject..that long wait for the school day to end, just before a holiday! yay! lol great right mate, plenty of figurative language and imagery..dont stop writing! xx |