Am pleased to be the first to comment, because i am liking the series and am so happy you are not planning to end it just yet. However, maybe you should try and make the mind understand, let us all know what actually went on.
love Tara-Kay
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Intresting.. i think that this one is also true.. stupid boys who make our heart fight with our mind. lol

again this flowed well and i really liked it.. another 5/5

Wow... you just keep writing these and I love them!! They are amazing! I love them so much... they are so life like and realistic!

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Oodles of Love!
[[Your Wifey]]

Hehe. I'm liking these. I can still picture a cartoon heart and mind chatting with each other. It's a rather intersting thing to think of.

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Kitty.

TOO CUTE.

Hey,
wow Its like a little comic but without the pictures, well i do see the pictures in my head..yea im strange.. well awesome serie of poems, and I hope to read the next one soon,
take care 5/5
kisses stephanie

=] once again, your poem bought a smile to my face lol, its just so full of itself...feelings and emotions. the mind seems to be fed up of seeing 'her' hurt again and again by the hearts 'foolish'-ness. i wonder whats coming next...? gd luk...nuf luv xx 5/5

Well done, I loved this one too, the word choice again was excellent, and the emtion just keeps getting deeper and deeper, I really loved this. all of these parts fit togather wonderfully, and i would like to read more. 5/5 one more time

I like the way the tension has grown...it seemed very formal up till now which did not seem right for this kind of dialogue. Now that its beginning to become more familiar it is getting so much better!

The fact that the tension is beginning to heat up in the atmostphere interests me exceedingly. I loved how the mind was concerned for the heart's sake and for the person's well-being. His (the mind) actions definitely ignited a negative reaction from the heart. In addition, it's difficult for me, in all likelihood to the troubled individual, to take sides between the heart and the mind, because both of them certainly have very good points! :D Keep them coming, sweets! XD Debbie