I love you

by kelsi   May 27, 2007


God...
I love you...
You have blessed me in so many ways.
I dont know what i would do without you in my life.
you have always been there for me in good and bad days.
I dont understand why many people bash your name.
Do they think you dont treat all people the same?!
I know you do.
I love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very inspirational words that passed through your heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Darlena

    SiMPLE, YET G0OD. KEPE UP THE GREAT W0RK !

    FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHENEVER U HAVE THE TiME. THANX. :)

    HAVE A NiCE DAY :]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I agree with SlaveTotheMusic's suggestion. In addition, perhaps adding more vivid descriptions as to *show how God is conducive to your well-being and such to will, in my humblest opinion, augment this poem to a higher degree or plane.

    Other than that, I find this piece rather delightful to read. It endears me completely, having tugged my heart by its sincere message for such a short piece. Nicely done.

    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite sweet and simple i found it to be short but inteeresting holding alot of emotions. I think if you edit the structure of them poem maybe put it into stanzas to make the poem flow a little bit better it would be great. Well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a poem to God that fitted the faith you see in the all mighty good job of showing your true faith. PLot121

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