That was really sweet, and really well written. the simple yet effective word choice really worked here, I think It could have held a little more emtion than it did, but hey nice job. 4/5

Very simple, yet good and sweet. i liked it, and is very true :)

Very sweet work...cute..i mean short n to the point...u got the message n love across through usage of simple words in an effective manner..but the only prob i found is the punctuations..other thn tht Good job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

This was a poem to God that fitted the faith you see in the all mighty good job of showing your true faith. PLot121

This poem was quite sweet and simple i found it to be short but inteeresting holding alot of emotions. I think if you edit the structure of them poem maybe put it into stanzas to make the poem flow a little bit better it would be great. Well done~mel

I agree with SlaveTotheMusic's suggestion. In addition, perhaps adding more vivid descriptions as to *show how God is conducive to your well-being and such to will, in my humblest opinion, augment this poem to a higher degree or plane.

Other than that, I find this piece rather delightful to read. It endears me completely, having tugged my heart by its sincere message for such a short piece. Nicely done.

Debbie

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Very inspirational words that passed through your heart