I think it's important that we all realize we are destined for something better, something worth living for. Death is never the answer and we've all gone through hard times in life, they just make us stronger people as we grow. I loved the poem and the truly heartfelt spoken words. Great flow and fantastic meaning, Excellent job 5/5

Ohh wow. Powerful. Reaches out and just grabs out. Tad bit inspirational too possibly. Yep I think so :]. Really nice job!

This poem was by far the best you've written that i can tell from. Definitly a 5/5 from me. This was so powerfully strong emotions ran deep throughout it. It was just amazing im stunned. This goes on my fav poems. Well done Vanessa i loved it alot. Truely stunning and flawless in my eyes. ~mel

Wow, that was really good. I like how it was structured differently for both halves of the poem. The only thing I didn't like is the ending. It just didn't seem to fit, IMO. I enjoyed reading this poem, nonetheless, though.

I loved this inspirational poem. The message is something people can relate to and take to heart. nicely done.
i also really like the format of the poem, it makes it look sharp.

great job. 5/5.

I loved it. great. great message it sends out.

I just wanted everyone to know that if you
could answer......I Have to the question too
that you are not alone in this twisted life
^^I like this one...so true...something which everyone who is depressed should know..
There were kinda small grammar errors...though the "Have u ever"worked good fro this write...some of the questions had li'l errors in them...though..i found this effectve n the structure gives a clear idea to the readers..intresting read
5/5

xxPoojaxx

This one is simply amazing! This would help people who are depressed feeling suicidal etc. I hope everyone can learn from this poem. because I learned a lot here! Thanks Vanessa! Anyway good job! 5/5!

Nice poem. It is nice of you to tell others there not alone. Keep up the great work. 5/5

'in you life ' < your.

'you ever drink ' < drank.
'Have to the question too" < i think it should have answer in there.

Wonderful poem.
Great meaning to it, just as alot of your poems have. I loved it! Lots.
So many people deal with this.
It brought me to tears, because everyone goes through this.. but many don't realize it.
Keep it up, hun.

Nice, nice job!

I really really liked this! It was great! But I think that it would be better..or the flow perhaps, if you didn't put "I have" after everyother line in the beginning. It was just overused..It was still great though!! 5/5
Tyanna

It was pretty long but you really managed to keep it to the point..Just an idea but if you change the title as 'Have You?...I Have' seems like more powerful
Anyway good masterpiece
Keep it up,
Laura

Another beautiful piece...the emotion and depth are clear for the reader to see, and I could sense the emotions behind the words.
I adore the ending, I found it to be beautiful, moving and hard hitting all at once.

I think the poem is very nice...i understand what you talk about, it really sucks when you feel like the only one, i always felt like a freak, because of it...
the way you written this is quite intersting, it seems like the poem has 2 different parts...
i can relate to most of this...
really nice of you to try to give people hope
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

So Much Emotion In This..One Thing To Say..."I Have Too" Deff A 5/5

It’s obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.