Wonderful poem. i could picture each thing in my mind.. gotta say if u make a poetry book and sell in stores. ill be the first at the door
50/50

I especially liked the wording here..It was so sophisticated and suitable to the poem
And my fave lines should be;

I was just here all the time on this arctic place
Darkness has overwhelmed this forsaken land
I cannot see the daystar above the misty sky
The rain is like a bomb that falls from the overcast

Good work,
Laura

I LOVE THE FLOW IN THE POEM..........I COULDNT REALLY RELATE TO IT BUT HEY ITS ABOUT YOU LOL I LIKED IT THOUGH I THINK ITS BEAUTIFUL

The amazing Yellow,
Wow! I'm completely blown away! This poem is incredible! The images that you created were so perfect and they formed a truly powerful picture in my mind. Your words were very suiting to this poem, and I must say, this poem is perfect.
I like how you portrayed your past homeland as a dream, but I am also very sad that you feel this way.
Keep it up, 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. Thanks for the RRC on my poem!

Wow this is such a great poem. i really liked it a lot it was such a wonderful write. it flowed nicely. keep on writing 5/5

~Kristina

I'm like...- Wow..... And again, it starts of so beautifly (or however you spell that =P) and you give it such a good twist, and turns out into such a beautiful poem =] And I really love the end!
"That dream.. Is just another paradise in my heart"
=)
Nice work.
xxx 5/5

Ohhh this is really so sad, but what really makes it sad is how truthful this poem is, and the image you create is so honest and straightforward................ it really is an amazing poem by an amazing poet
5/5
gabriella

Nice job here but i think i loved the 1st poem the best out of all that i have read from urs, 5/5 still

This was a really well penned poem, i loved your idea and your visiuals that you creatd were great. You had some really strong emotions in there followed by some great similies. my favourite was
'The rain is like a bomb that falls from the overcast'
It was such a sad peom, but again your writting remained beautifully penned.
Deserves a 5/5
xxx

Great poem.
Great imagery and discriptions.
enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Your imagery alway's stunn's me.
It's flawless.
And my god, how talented you are.
I absoulutly love the description you put into expressing your feeling's.
You did a beautiful job painting your paradise, in this captivating poem.

Keep it up marc,
I look forward to reading you next peice,
Elaine.

The imagery in this poem was excellent. You did an amazing job of describing the places in this poem and I got a clear vivid picture in my head. The flow went off a bit in this poem but it was beautifully written 5/5.

-Shannon <3

Another truely inspirational piece you have talent i like this stanza the most

I want to reside forever in this heavenly place
Nothing can stop me to live here for eternity..
Suddenly a frosty wind passes through me
I realized it was just a blissful dream..

its cute sweet and sad rolled into one and i loved int
if i could go over 5 id give you 10 but i cant so suck to be you
5/5

Imagery was really strong in this piece. Made whole poem beautiful. FLowed amazingly and good wording. Really liked how you took your homeland in this poem and mixed it with sad emotions. Great work!
5/5

Beautiful poem...just beautiful!.... the emotion was expressed through every single word....i imagined all in my mind....

it flowed perfectly...it was just so descriptive and thats what i love about it..

excellent job as always...5/5

Lovely poem!
i loved the imagry you used and the way it was written in general!

"The rain is like a bomb that falls from the overcast"

i especially loved this! im not sure why but it just works so well guess it describes how bad the rain is....

honestly an amazing poem!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

By the way 5/5!!!

Wow, All your poems are so highly rated and so many comments have been places on each one LOL. I loved the use of words that you used in this poem really added more poem to each stanza lol keep it up xxx Much Love From Roxy

Do you miss the Philippines, kababayan? :-) A beautiful, heart-gripping poem! Why, I for one would like to go the UK. I love England. I guess, you know, it's more fun here in RP.