Distilled Desire

by Debbie   May 27, 2007


In time, a desire distilled
Instilled in me
A lascivious grace
. . .divine,
As a serrated spring
In a bell-clear morning. . .

Then I culled and recalled,

. . .In a bell-clear morning
As a serrated spring
Divine. . .
A lascivious grace
Instilled in me
A desire distilled. . . in time. . .

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*Written for a contest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, this was so good Marian.
    I'm usually bad at writing things for contests but you seem pretty good at it girl :)

    Marjan x

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    I love your word choice. Your are such a great writer. The words you choose are strong yet they flow nicely together making a wonderful piece.
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I love this! It's absolutely flawless. Very beautiful little poem. I'm always ready to be amazed when I go to read something you've written. And I always am lol. It was peaceful, the words just seem to run together, like they were meant to be written this way. 5/5!

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, but it completely made sense. the way you made the words come alive, was totally awesome. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Why, thank you, darling. =] I'll edit the structure now.

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