Hun,

Wow... Just wow.
That was heartbreaking.... If this true, then you are very strong... & I'm sorry that all this has happened.

"You can't hold my hands as i try to cut
You can't hold my hands has i try to end it all
you can't hold me close and tell me that you love me
You can't hold me close and let me cry

I can't hold you close as your sanity slips away again
I can't hold you close as you feel you have nothing left
I can't hold you close as everything around you falls do the ground
I can't hold you anymore"

^ That was simple magnificent - everything was great. The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong, & the word usage was good. Wonderful job, keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.