by aDORKable x3 May 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A teardrop slides down her wet cheek; |
Ciao darling, you always write SOO well! It's an awesome poem. The hurt and betrayal ring clear as a bell here. It's very very very well done. 5/5 defintely my Hunni Bunches of Oats!! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Love this! i like how you use the title in the poem, and you capitalize the letters. |
by *Charisma*
WOW! Though the flow seemed a bit forced at time...it was a great poem! |
by Chrissie
Wow hun. This was so amazing. I'm speechless. The last stanza was beautiful..very emotional. It was a very very very good poem. Awesome work. Xx Chrissie |