Wow hun. This was so amazing. I'm speechless. The last stanza was beautiful..very emotional. It was a very very very good poem. Awesome work. Xx Chrissie

WOW! Though the flow seemed a bit forced at time...it was a great poem!

The words that are heard are as deadly as venom -
She covers the bruises with make up and denim.

I loved those two lines! Good job!
Charisma*

Love this! i like how you use the title in the poem, and you capitalize the letters.

my favorite line is: The clods of dirt litter the mouth of the hole -

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5/5.

Ciao darling, you always write SOO well! It's an awesome poem. The hurt and betrayal ring clear as a bell here. It's very very very well done. 5/5 defintely my Hunni Bunches of Oats!!

Much Love,
Cinnamon Toast Crunch
Your Wifey