Well done. keep writiing and surely your talent will arise, great first poem. nice wording and emotions.

David

I liked this poem very much!!....really emotive
keep up the gr8 work
bree

:( so said! Love it! You have a beautiful!

Uncomparable to my poems! your the best!

Wow... I love this one. I can relate to it in so many ways. You portrayed your emotions in this piece excellently, and you said so much in just three stanzas. Whole poem is also very original.
Truly deep and heartfelt write.

I really like this . It is creative and the ending was inspiring. Excellent job on this one!

Great poem.
It was really sad,
Beautiful written.
Take care

Hmmm.... says alot in so few lines, very good job!

thank you, and keep it up

take care ;]

Once again I have found a poem that we share the title of (Time) , (Wnds of Change )
It seems that a different perspective on the same subject multiplies the effect greatly

This is such a well written , enlightening piece of poetry and I certainly will read more of your heart and mind in verse

So sad! I felt like this some time ago when I feel cheated by her. Only difference is, it changed me in some ways and I realize how much I needed love.

This poem reminded me a bit of my characters.. you know, Iden and Devon. I'm not sure why, but Iden brings out something everybody has. :) And that's what I love about your poem.. I'm sure most people can relate with it. 5/5

As time progressed I finally understood
you are just another side of me...
^^ wow good job with that i like the realization you came to it made me think of when i was in that situation and that is probably what i should have realized

great job with flow and wording very good poem! 5/5

Hey love this poem
its like a person found
there inner self but the
dark side of them selfs
but love it (^_^)

5/5

Very well put words expressing your emotions quite well, and yes is it not true how time seems to stand still when things go really well or really bad. Well done

You spelled grief wrong

Grant

Wow, good poem! ;)

Mmm very hard to understand , through all the emotions and i can feel the chock of the insident !!!

it made the world stop !!

i love the intensity of the feelings , it made , me remmber , my own!!!

gerat poem \\

my favorite is :
As time progressed I finally understood
you are just another side of me...

i love that and i ca relate in so many ways
!!

you deserve my vote

Hmm, wow I really liked this one. It carries a very strong message and it is very true. The wording and everything was great about this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Sad and yet promising. Love isn't always fair, or forever. But from your poems I see you not only know this but enjoy the times you love and are able to move on
This was so well said. Enjoyed every word

Alll your poems are absolutely amazing!

I liked the simplicity of this poem in contrast to how hard it is to move on from someone/something that we once loved. A beautiful write, I particularly enjoyed the ending. 5/5

mandy :)