It's all my fault.

by Willow   May 28, 2007


It's my fault he's yelling,
And my fault he's storming about.
It's my fault Baxter's nearly crying,
And my fault they're running around.

It's my fault she's crying,
And my fault she stressing out.
It's my fault he's so angry,
And my fault they both shout.

It's my fault the past is flooding back,
And my fault Hamish has gone quiet.
It's my fault the feeling in this house has gone flat,
And my fault he no longer cares.

It's my fault my parents fought tonight,
He always seems angry at me.
It's all my fault,
So lets just let it be.

*written on the 25.05.07*

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    The repeating , just amplifies the emotion
    -take care-

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Hey, i kno that feeling. its hard aye? it takes a while but ive learnt to deal with it. mmpphh hope it gets better for u 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    I like this... i know where its coming from too. you should read some of mine about my dad. =) keep it up this is great.

  • 17 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    Excellent.. allegoric
    i love this and the last 2 lines.. "It's all my fault,/ So lets just let it be."

    you're doing very very good for your age, you're talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I like your writing, keep it up.

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