Willow ily so much stay beautiful sweetheart and be brave i believe in you =1

I like your writing, keep it up.

Excellent.. allegoric
i love this and the last 2 lines.. "It's all my fault,/ So lets just let it be."

you're doing very very good for your age, you're talented

I like this... i know where its coming from too. you should read some of mine about my dad. =) keep it up this is great.

Hey, i kno that feeling. its hard aye? it takes a while but ive learnt to deal with it. mmpphh hope it gets better for u 5/5

The repeating , just amplifies the emotion
-take care-

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