The Shopping Cart

by Mark Spencer   May 28, 2007


The Shopping Cart
By Mark Spencer

So you think you're altruistic;
A kind and loving soul.
Your heart is full of charity,
Peace is your only goal.

You try doing unto others,
As you would have them do,
Unto the ones they love the most,
That's how they should treat you.

But if you are considerate,
As loving as you thought,
Perhaps you'd like to take a stroll,
Across the parking lot.

See where you failed to show concern,
For how your deeds affect,
Whoever might come after you;
You gave them no respect.

You had to get some shopping done,
Down at the super mart.
Then wheeled your items to your car,
Using a shopping cart.

And once you packed them in the car,
You should have done your part.
Those caddies in the parking lot,
Are for the shopping carts.

But that was much too far to walk,
To put it in its place.
Instead you simply left it there,
In someone's parking space.

"They pay someone to round them up,"
You quietly remark.
What happens if the lot is full,
And someone wants to park?

Have they been paid to leave their car,
And clear the parking space?
To put the cart you left behind,
Into it's proper place?

You left something for someone else,
To clean up after you.
But if the rolls had been reversed,
What is it they should do?

You claim to be considerate,
Unselfish in your heart.
And yet you let somebody else,
Deal with your shopping cart.

It's the things we take for granted,
That we cannot ignore.
They show us who we really are,
Down deep within our core.

You'll learn a lot about someone;
What's really in their heart,
By what they do when they get through,
Using that shopping cart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mark Spencer

    It's really very simple Jennifer. Do unto others as you would have them do unto you. If a person is too lazy to put his shopping cart in one of the caddies, located all over the parking lot, he's revealing that he's too lazy to do the right thing. The right thing being, to put things in their proper place, once we are finished using them; even if that means inconveniencing ourselves a little. Instead, the man leaves the cart in the parking space next to his car. When his space is filled by another car, after he vacates, and the only free space left is the one his shopping cart occupies, the person who wants to park there must exit her car, and push the discarded cart out of the way. Rather than inconveniencing himself, the man inconveniences the woman who pushes his cart out of the way. That is not doing unto others as we would have them do unto us. We are all in this world together. Don't you think it's about time we started acting like it? If we can't do it with something so simple as a shopping cart, how do you think we'll fair when we really have to put out? That's what this poem is about. God bless.

    Mark

  • 17 years ago

    by mrsmoore

    I really didn't understand this one. i mean i get where your going, just a little bumpy to actually understand how you got there.

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