by Ash May 28, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Unaware but cautious |
I agree about the confusing part, but some parts of this were brilliant: |
by Vanessa
It was a little confusing, but the metaphors were brillant. The poem would be a little easier for the reader to read and understand, if you seprate it in to stazas. Other tahn that the simple word choice was quite effective, and the emtion was strong, and clear. 5/5 |
by Startle Me
Honestly? |
Different poem, but i like it. Great job. 5/5 |