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by Xx trying to be strong but only just holding onxX May 28, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
With the feeling so strong, and the heart not in the right place, not knowing what to do, with pain in my heart, and sadness in my soul, with an empty hole in my heart, cos of loosing that one guy that i love, that really meant everything to me, not knowing if he knows that he means everything to me, not knowing if he really still love's me, feeling so empty inside cos i don't no if he still wants to be with me, i don't no if he still love's me, although he says he does, does that mean, he really means it, he told me we would be together 4 ever, but i guess 4 ever ended to fast, no more to say as my heart just brakes just writing this...... well Brodie i love you so much and you will always be in my heart....
by Marcus
Good poem but there are errors and you can improve on the writing a little but good poem 5/5