If this is true...im glad that you are strong enough to do that. so many people arent and it is really sad. so good job :o)

as for the poem...
the rythm was good, along with the rhyming.
the rhyming in the last lines were kind of off because it was the same word...
but overall it was a very good poem.

This is a really good poem, i can totally feel the emotion in it. you have an amazing skill!
i hope everything works out between you and that kid!