by Yvonne May 28, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The sounds of children |
The last stanza feels rushed but the overall feel is a pulling saddness that you aren't there and it's just a memory. It's a great poem really good job relaying that |
by x Mo x
Aw....great poem! It was awesome! I love how it flows and the memories it stirred. Youre an awesome poet, Keep it up! |